First Time Lucky

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Fingers glide
along my skin,
hover
above my hip,
give my ass a squeeze.
All I can do
is whisper
“please”

Soft hands lift,
fondle my breast
She hesitates
I don’t protest

Nibbles my nipple
her tongue is hot
thumb strays
strokes fleshy knot
pinches gently
just a tease
and I softly whisper
“please”

Rolls me over
kisses my neck
licks away
nervous sweat

beading on belly,
catching in fur
her tongue dances
now I purr
need to say I want her
but I gasp–
and whimper
“please”

Thighs of white satin
ease mine apart
clit thrumming wildly
to the beat of my heart

Fiery breath-
I bite my lip,
arch my back and lift.
She licks and sucks,
fingers press deep,
my legs tremble
hoarsely I beg
“please”

I writhe and buck
tear the sheets
and scream
“Oh please, God please”

Sweet Release

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4 Comments
KingCuddleKingCuddleover 7 years ago
YESSSS!

Mmmmm...Nice narrative!

Bill DadaBill Dadaabout 19 years ago
!!!!!!!!

'Oh please, God please', such polite 'sweet release'

I loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Hot

This is so vivid and . . . wet!

lucky-E-levenlucky-E-levenabout 20 years ago
Lucky lust

Syn, the First Time Lucky breeds an insatiable desire for many happy returns to Synful Wrytings. I love it, loved it and will no doubt love it many more times in future.

~lucky

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