Five Years On

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Five years on, and still it hurts,

The pain is fresh in my mind,

The life we had, torn apart,

The love I left behind.

Five years on, it's gone so fast,

How the time has flown by,

Since the night I saw you last,

Since our final goodbye.

Five years on, is it that long?

I remember it all so well,

How we'd fuck from dusk ‘til dawn,

Every touch, every taste, every smell.

Five years on, since that night,

When our time reached its end,

Since we had our final fight,

But no more will I pretend.

Five years on, and I still regret,

Every time I told you a lie,

I'll always remember, never forget,

Every time I made you cry.

Five years on, and I miss you,

I did back then and still I love you,

I want just one more chance to kiss you,

But I know I never deserved you.

Five years on, our story I write,

But I'd turn back the clocks if I could,

All I want is to make things right,

If I could have you back, I would.

Five years on, nothing has changed,

My love for you hasn't gone,

So if when we meet, it isn't too strange,

Let's start again now, five years on.

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Gay_Love_LoverGay_Love_Loverover 6 years ago

Ok, this almost had me tear up. Beautifully sad.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

That has to be one of the most heartbreaking things I have ever read. The feeling is added to the fact that I realized you write from experience and this poem could be a note to Abby from your other story. I don't know what your situation is or what hers is, but if what she felt for you is even a fraction of what you felt for her, please don't give up. Show her this poem and maybe even the other story because they show just how bad you know you fucked up and miss her.

I could be wrong, and this poem and your other story are mere figments of your imagination(in which case please write a book because your writing is so heartfelt and moving), but if I am correct in assuming these are your personal stories, please, don't give up just yet. We have to root for some happy endings out there, so why can't it be yours?

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