- Erotic Poetry
- Flame
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My fire has been stirred,
The flame of passion ignited!
That which I had laid to rest …
That which could not be extinguished …
That which was strong – too strong for mere Men!
I feel you like I have felt no other
Your flame reaches for mine and burns with fury
You take me, I am hot!
We dance inside our fires of passion
Bodies seething, swirling, sucking, fucking!
Together we ride the flame of desire!
Fuelled by lust, the deep orange glow of sex burns bright -
Wrapping round our bodies, lapping at our souls
I scream a suffocating scream! Your heat no longer bearable -
Tugging at my heart – tearing through my mind – burning in my womb!
I scream once more – clawing at your back –
Beads of sweat mingling together – dripping to the ground!
We scream and cry in unison and as a volcano erupts –
Spitting flames of dirt and ash high into the air
So you erupt my love, so I erupt my love, our flame extinguished, at last!
- COMMENTS
YDDalmost 20 years agoThe theme and metaphor are very popular on Literotica,
consequently it can be difficult to present the "fire of passion" in words that do not seem hackneyed.
The poem also might benefit from less "You take me, I am hot!" telling,
and more descriptive showing.
Keep writing!
WickedEvealmost 20 years agoLots of hot, fire stuff going on here. Fire is used quite a bit in erotic poetry. Quite a bit.
