- Erotic Poetry
- Flog Me to Death
Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.
You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.
Click hereViolate every nerve
Quite deliberately
The physical, tangible, psyche, the abstract
Everything
Take every atom to the limits of endurance
I Sink
Escape to that place
Where stars stand still
And the horror disapears
Pain replacing horror
Acceptance replacing pain
Bliss replacing acceptance
But do not stop
Keep going
Take me
All the way
To the edge
And beyond
Make me bleed
Absolution a necessity
Pour me out
A river of blood
Wash me away
Never to return
- COMMENTS
perksalmost 20 years agoPoets, this poem has possiblities. Yes it is raw, and has a few cliches here and there, but you can tweak it easily. At risk of possibly offending the author, and new poet to our proverbial ranks, I'd love to see what you would do with it. There is so much potential in this little grouping of words that I can't help but put you all to task. If it were me, I would use lots of her meter and perspective, work on the physical structure, remove a few cliches and add a bit of meter for some better fluidity. All that being said, I feel there is some pretty good imagery in here. Post your leetle poem squeakings in the "so the new poems thread won't get cluttered" thread. Can't wait to see what you come up with. Get to work, ya lazy bastards.
