- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Flower for Love
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Red blue and white all
colors to choose from
Smells of heaven
and some smells of old to new
So many to choose how about
a bokeh of all
Each rose and blossom
represents one thing
I love about you
The rose is your eyes
for they both sparkle,
the lily is your hair
for it is light and delicate,
the sunflower is your
bright personality
Each flower I now hold
is for the one I love
and whom they represent
- COMMENTS
Desejoalmost 11 years agoI like the idea of comparing someone to a bouquet - especially one where each flower represents something you love about that person. Some suggestions: you start out with red, white and blue - which, at least for Americans (and maybe French and Dutch) make one think of a flag, not a person. There is nothing about the blue that follows, but a sunflower (yellow) is added. Consider eliminating the first line and reworking the next three to simply present the bouquet, the thought behind it..and then explain each flower. Also watch your spelling -bokeh could not possibly have passed a spell check. Just suggestions, and I do think this is a lovely idea and worth reworking.
