Flower in Bloom

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My perfect Flower in bloom
I should have known
She’d seal my doom

Once filled with nature’s sweetest perfume

As She is, so once was I
But now I shall surely
Wilt and die

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AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Such ...

wonderful flowery words... the picture is etched in my mind

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
Gorgeous.

Flowery words ~ beautiful Photo of a bright flower. Womanhood is like a beautiful flower ~ but like the flowers eventually wilts and dies. Haunting sentiments.

Bill DadaBill Dadaabout 18 years ago
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Beautiful picture, beautiful poem.

PS I think you are still 'filled with nature’s sweetest perfume' and a long ways from wilting and dying.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
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Interesting words and beautiful picture combine to make us think.

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 18 years ago
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excellent literary creation of words and chosen picture. Very Good!

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