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Click hereFog.
Deep in the woods,
Silent fog
Drifts in tendrils
That climbs trees
Like ghostly
Children
Silken mist,
On the fields
Shapeless,
Spirits dance
Without sound
Merge, entangle
And disappear
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twelveooneabout 13 years ago*
well done 5, see sandburg, somewhere on the web is a 6 page explanation of sandburg's "fog", if you find it may be of interest.
Maria2394about 13 years agoooohhh
I liked this one. It is eerie without being frightening. Good work.
~ maria
