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bluerains
bluerains
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gentle openings separate
pathways behind
stray shadows
clinging to black tinged
blades of exit

thorns recoil
holding the stem
of memory
wrapping around
each withering
root stock
planted in
semblance of a rose..

bluerains
bluerains
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LeBrozLeBrozabout 16 years ago
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This poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 39,000 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.<br>

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
What are you putting...

in your coffee? You are knocking them out of the park,

and this is a grand slam. Great layout and wording.

sand

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
really deep poem

This is one of your best, deep, profound and compelling... in short...perfect!

QP

dcpoet44dcpoet44almost 19 years ago
images do leave....

nice things in the folds of darkness and vivid in this case.......nicely done.......don

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Talealmost 19 years ago
nice vineyard blue

torns on beauty that are blue.

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