foolish girl...

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i am empty
i have nothing in me
now that i have lost You
i am not in a void
i am the void
i loved so fully
so fast
so foolishly
walking into Your arms
with eyes wide open
knowing my place in Your
harem
and now
You have finished with me
discarded me like
so much refuse
brushed me away
a crumb from Your table
dust on Your floor
left
swept
gone

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4 Comments
TathagataTathagataalmost 20 years ago
" i am

in the void, i am the void"

Great line

we've all been there

As always I feel your sadness and pain.

and, as always, I am touched

thank you

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 20 years ago
One thing I've learned...

is not to necessarily write about a specific pain, but to focus the energy of that pain into my writing--whatever the topic may be.

YDDYDDalmost 20 years ago
Very. . .

If you are truly empty,

why write about it now?

What have you to write?

People, including Masters,

see you as you present yourself.

Find something of value to present to him

and to your readers.

You and your poems will be better for it.

YDDYDDalmost 20 years ago
Very. . .

If you are truly empty,

why write about it now?

What have you to write?

People, including Masters,

see you as you present yourself.

Find something of value to present to him

and to your readers.

You and your poems will be better for it.

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