Foolish Me

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I’ll be going now
foolish me who ever thought
I could find someone in another world
and bring him into mine
wrap him up like a grand gift
and hear him scrambling about
laughing and playing inside
never wanting to be let out
Foolish me to ever think
my box could hole him up
that he wouldn’t find a crack
to slip his body through
that he’d be content in my darkness
close his eyes and live my dreams
that he would cherish being treasured
Oh silly, foolish me

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LeBrozLeBrozabout 16 years ago
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This poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 39,000 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.<br>

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LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Perhaps more bittersweet than irony;

not easy for one to find another

to share any type of vision...

sacksackover 18 years ago
is it sarcasm or bittersweet..?

I can interpret this poem both ways!

dcpoet44dcpoet44over 18 years ago
looks like sarcasm....

to me along with an ironic twist to it. nicely done......don

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