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Click hereDid you know
that when I found you
I didn't even know you?
your sweet embrace
captured my broken heart
you were there
my angel of the dark.
Slowing slipping into a midnight waltz,
dancing with death, slipping my thoughts,
of you and me, as one
my angel, my god. Where will you be?
Dancing playfully in the dark,
like fire and ice, we are as one.
my hair like water rippling through the night,
My heart feels whole, this is so right.
Your eyes like sapphires, your hair covering your eye,
Oh how to place my hand along your cold cheek,
The night you died, brings me to tears.
Where will you be, my solace of desire?
my angel- my love. I am here waiting..
I have no idea how someone could come up with such a haunting poem. It sent shivers down my spine. In a good way!
Hopefully you will come out with more poems. Five isn't enough!
Thanks so much for such kind comments everyone <3
You capture the moment quite well and manage to say all you need to. It will be lovely to see how your own voice grows as your verse developes with more writing.
Thankyou.
a really good poem and I felt the emotions that spawned this poem, thanks for the read