For Whom the Girl Cums

For Whom the Girl Cums

These are song lyrics I wrote for my band, parodying Metallica's "For Whom the Bell Tolls" and turning it into a sexual song. We're currently obsessed with parodying other famous songs lol. I'm thinking of showing my band mates these lyrics, so I want honest feedback. I recommend listening to the vocal parts of the actual song if you don't know the vocal melody; it makes it easier to follow along. I'll warn you, if you don't know the song, it's one of Metallica's heaviest songs, so it's not everyone's taste. Just be prepared if you don't like metal music. Anyway, thanks for reading.

Verse 1:
Stick it in
All the way
In her deep, tight hole
Constant thrusts deep inside.
Moaning sound
On I pound
Up against the wall.
In and out
Scream and shout
Yes, I'm almost there.
For the pill
She would kill
Why? I do not know.
Scratching marks down my back
Sixty nine
Short on time
Though I won't say no.
Gonna bust
With the lust
That I surely know!

Chorus:
For whom the girl cums.
She cums for thee.
For whom the girl cums.

Verse 2:
Take a look
In her eyes
Just before you die.
It's the last time you will!
Primal scream
Angry scream
Fills the evening air.
Dad of doom
Enters room
Like a snarling bear.
Pissed off now
Is her dad
With this treachery.
Heard her moaning so loud!
Crack of gun
Now I'm done
Except that it's too late.
Did the deed
Gave my seed
Knocked her up you'll see!

Chorus:
For whom the girl cums.
She cums for thee.
For whom the girl cuuuummmmmmmssssssss!!!

That's it. I know it's short, but there aren't a whole lot of lyrics in the actual song. Hope you liked it. Honest feedback wanted. Thanks again for reading.