For You, During Rain

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Thunderstorms here
Cat purring in my lap

I'd edit this scene if I could
To add you on the couch

The cat would be moved to make room
And once you rested in his place

 I could be your weather

Running fingers of electricity through your body
Flickering, jolting, illuminating
With crashes and peals
My voice a tickling hush of rainfall, steady and reassuring

Until sunshine broke through
All quiet and still

And you and the cat would both purr

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IanSaulWhitcombIanSaulWhitcombover 7 years agoAuthor
@slavesindee

Thanks! I'm a fan of purring.

slavesindeeslavesindeeover 7 years ago
Please

lovely poem makes me want to be on your lap purring. and then pleasing You as You desire

IanSaulWhitcombIanSaulWhitcombalmost 9 years agoAuthor
Thanks for all the feedback!

@greenmountaineer: Nice technical point. I predict that you are one of the rare people who knows what the subjunctive mood is!

@tazz317: This was definitely a scene sans Oprah!

@Anonymous (Simply Beautiful): You picked the right word with "muse." This one seemed to flow out from some greater-than-I inspiration of the moment.

@Anonymous (Wish): We're getting an unusual amount in my neck of the woods!

@todski28: I never get tired of the word "brilliant," although it sometimes makes me feel a bit unworthy. : )

todski28todski28almost 9 years ago
brilliant

5ed what greenmountaineer said :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Wish

Makes me wish for rain.

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