- Non-Erotic Poetry
- For your beauty
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Click hereLet me take you to the lakes.I will show you beauty that is only ever matched by the radiance of your smile.
We could walk down the quiet streets to a place that holds all of the poetry ever needed .A man is buried there the poet of the soul a man called William his works of pure art echo the feelings i have for you.The feelings of peace and beauty so missing in my life until i met you.
We could walk hand in hand through Grassmere the snow gently falling.We could kiss beneath the street lights outside the church where the man of a thousand dreams could look upon the two of us and feel that his words of true love and beauty had been all heared and were not uttered to be wasted to the four winds.
If i could take you there i know you would know my heart is true and it is meant to be with beauty such as you.
- COMMENTS
tungtied2uover 19 years agobut I think the poem is over wordy and loses impact because of it. You might try condensing it by removing undescriptive words, put in some punctuation and check your spelling (heared=heard). Keep writing..
LilDarlinover 19 years agoSuch beauty.. Words flow smooth an silky. I want to go there and never return. Such a wonderful place to be. Painted me a picture of a world filled with love and dreams. Loved it.. Keep them coming...~~
