Forgiveness

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In my youth
you cared for me.
In my sorrow
you wept.
Held my hand
at crossroads.
Tied my shoelaces
lest I fell.


And yet I can't
forgive you
for things you
didn't do.
And yet I fail
to love you
as now I see
your mistakes.


What cruel child
you have left behind
to remember you in hate.
When all you tried
to do was help
even though you failed.

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LeBrozLeBrozalmost 16 years ago
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This poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 39,000 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.<br>

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LeBrozLeBrozabout 16 years ago
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A parent's real nightmare — remembering their own parents' failings while committing new ones of their own.

YDDYDDalmost 20 years ago
Forgiveness

Short and simple,

easy to understand with no complex thoughts or images.

I might suggest that you consider tweaking the lines:

"What cruel child

you have left behind"

By doing something like either add an "a" in the first line,

or reversing the two words in the second. - "Un-stilt" it, or double "stilt" for effect.

TathagataTathagataalmost 20 years ago
wow

this is sure to make every parent stop and think.

tender and heartbreaking.

A very emotional piece

thank you

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