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Four Senses


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I crave the sight of you.
The graceful play of muscle under skin,
the gentle undulation of limbs,
the fluidity of motion/emotion
as you writhe and shudder and
under, above, around me.
The shape of you,
your peaks and valleys.
The curve of your lips, your hips, your back.
The love, radiating from your smile.
The wanting in your eyes,
bathing me in brightest,
purest light.

I need the taste of you.
The sweetest nectar on my tongue.
Flooding me.
A sacred drug that flows through me.
My most loved addiction.
Like water it sustains me.
Your kisses' flavor gives meaning and salvation.
Sugar, spice.
Earth, sun, seasons.
Driving me to the brink and
bringing me home again.

I desire the feel of you.
Surrounding me.
Pressed against me, a shelter.
An invition.
Unyielding, but soft;
gentle but insistent.
A constant
sensuous promise;
A perfect fit,
a sacred embrace.
A teasing caress, awakening rasp,
exquisite slide, grasp, clutch.
Comfort and craving.
A balm to ache and nerve.
Protecting and enticing.
Enveloping warmth, gentle.
Your whispers on my skin.
Your arms around me,
your kiss upon me,
your love wrapped around me.

I want for the sound of you.
Filling my ears, my head,
my life, with your sweet music.
Your quickened breath
setting a rhythm.
My name from your lips
like a prayer.
Your promise a blessing.
Your love a declaration,
the perfect sonnet.
Shouts and exclaimations
resounding off the walls.
Each leaving an echo as a symphony upon my soul.

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