Fragile

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Your white spiny conch was a treasure
we found, one smoothed with time.
I saw you whispering in its curve
and hide it away with a secret smile,
"Someday you will know."

Years, I listen to the shell and I hear
an 'I love you' said for the first time.

Love like that shell are fragile.
I remember us, how we were and then
let it all fall. They break and I crush
them under heel, furthering the shatter.
You can't fix that darling.

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AngelineAngelineover 10 years ago
I think this has huge potential

but needs work. I assume you are saving it for further work cause I know you. :D

There are minor fixes needed and then the poem will be spectacular.