- Non-Erotic Poetry
- fragmented
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hand shoved down throat
heart ripped out
soul cut in half
fragmented
vacant empty space left
i toss it at the wall
*splat*
blood pours out
paints a portrait of you
love has left my soul
- by Savannah Skye...
- COMMENTS
LeBrozabout 16 years agoThis poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 39,500 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.<br>
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Bill Dadaabout 19 years ago'blood pours out
paints a portrait of you'
I agree with Bridget69, those are two very powerful lines. Of course I also really liked '*splat*', but then I'm really weird.
BD
Anonymousabout 19 years agofilled with violent emotional qualities done with a short style that demonstrates the death of love in powerful verse.... well worth the read..
Mentioned in the Sunday on Monday reviews..
Du Lac~
Bridget69about 19 years agoVery moving, especially this part,
"blood pours out
paints a portrait of you"
