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Click herePungent steam rises from a darkened bog
below the billowy trail to her fate.
The beast awaits above her small shoulders,
frowning at his incomplete reflection.
The child smiles as a butterfly trembles
quietly toward ready blooms on the rise.
The beast twists his flat head sharply,
curious about the meaning of smiles.
Fighting misunderstood instincts, he smiles,
and joins the butterfly in festive flight.
!(100!)!
Best line:
quietly toward ready blooms on the rise.
Worst line:
none
Well, ok I know the movie lol, but still it's vivid and the poem is full of the motion that helps convey what's happening. In otherwords, you done good! :D
And this was one - a pleasurable puzzle-solving start to the day - thank you. S.O