- Non-Erotic Poetry
- fridge
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Click hereyou drink the one with milk that was made by mistake
while i sit on the floor in your kitchen
and paint my heart all over your shiny fridge door
you wash the sheets
would you put the words back in place before she arrives?
you refuse distraction
with such endearing purpose
your pretty eyes already looking to the next
and you know why i tried to leave without saying goodbye
when i go
i wish you were walking next to me
to watch everytime my skirt blows up in the breeze
- COMMENTS
LeBrozover 15 years agoThis poem has been selected for listing in Wednesday's New Poems Review.<br>
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WickedEveover 15 years agoI can tell you wrote about a real experience and you did a great job with it. I like the poem and it makes sense to me, except the first line. I know the first line has meaning for you but as a reader I'm lost. It seems like a stray line that's just hanging out near the poem. But the poem is good enough that it first line isn't that big of a distraction.
