- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Friends Forever
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Click hereFriends Forever
We're joined in a friendship
That time can not sever.
With bonds we have built
We'll remain friends forever
We're welded in spirit,
Attached by our hearts.
We're fused by the feeling
That Friendship imparts.
We're tied by emotions.
Connected by dreams.
Reinforced by our hopes,
Unified by extremes.
No longer a function
Of time or of space,
Our love is a substance
That life won't replace.
No matter how distant,
We'll always endeavor
To sense the full meaning
Of frienship forever.
- COMMENTS
LeBrozover 18 years agoExcellent!
And Welcome to Lit!
A small suggestion ~ seems to be too much use of the word we're. See what it sounds like without the first word in the 2nd & 3rd stanza.
mcopadoover 18 years agoBeautiful dear!!!
So glad to see you putting your wonderful heart and talents to good use. You are an amazing woman...and a wondeful friend.
agent2407over 18 years agoMy comment is simple...it made me smile and think of lovely childhood memories. Nice rhyming words
