- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Frost
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I listen for your footsteps in the snow
Hear your boots as they crunch the crystal frost
Your key hits my lock and my breath stops
I hear you shake off the cold as you walk to me
Your clothes hit the floor, I smile
Feeling your body slide next to mine
Your arms envelope my form
The warmth of your skin electrifies me
I can feel your body react to my touches
You grow and sigh
My hands find you, my lips find yours
Your flesh burns 'tween my fingers
I awaken sweat covered, hair matted
I am alone, the dream is over
I shed a tear
The frost is back on the windows
- COMMENTS
My Erotic Trailover 18 years agoI really liked that "WORD" <GRIN AND OF COURSE THE POEM. very nice write, bows humble (~_*)
LeBrozover 18 years agoWelcome to Lit
With this fine write.
Just a couple suggestions - envelope is that thing in which you place a letter - drop the last "e" and you're being wrapped up & enfolded. Tighten up a bit, drop the "me" so it reads,
"Your arms envelop my form
The warmth of your skin electrifies"
I enjoy a good read; you inspired my critiquing mood.
