Frosted Carnival

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Du Lac
Du Lac
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I awoke this morning
to a comforter of snow
skittering
across the frozen terra.

Gray skies pregnant
with frozen drips of confused water.

Wind whipping
through a frosted carnival.

Snow flakes playing bumper cars
outside my window.

Far off mirthful screams
wind beating at the glass.
Spring thaw forgotten again!

dlt © Feb. 21 2005

Du Lac
Du Lac
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LeBrozLeBrozabout 16 years ago
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templemindedtemplemindedalmost 19 years ago
hey it's cold

and i thought it was summer, there i go with them thoughts again lol

nin-

Bridget69Bridget69about 19 years ago
Winter Wonderland.

Paints a vivid natural landscape.

Bill DadaBill Dadaabout 19 years ago
Snow's it goes

This felt like a cold snowy day. Maybe one two many frozens, but snow doesn't always blanket, and skittering feels cold to me. Also really liked the snowflake bumpercars.

BD

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleabout 19 years ago
skitter-tasticly muar-velous publopoem

no body Du like the Du~

I liked it <grin>

I want to throw the balls <lmao>

and win a barney <ha ha>

great poem Du~

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