Hi!! This is my THIRD attempt on poem section LOL. I'm not sleepy yet so I figured I submit another one :D

Hope you guys will like this too...

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With love, Jayleen



My heart wallowed,
Bleeding like the heavy rain,
Washing away my serenity,
My breath taken away,
Deep inside...

Where's the courage?
To face all of this,
So alone,
I couldn't let it go,
I couldn't let myself see,
The truth behind the veil of life...

Baby, you were gone,
So far away from me,
I tried to reach out,
Trying to touch your hand,
But I couldn't...

Baby, you were gone,
Leaving me frozen,
In my state of despair,
Of shattered heart and soul...

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