Frozen

byJayleen88©

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Hi!! This is my THIRD attempt on poem section LOL. I'm not sleepy yet so I figured I submit another one :D

Hope you guys will like this too...

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With love, Jayleen

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Frozen

My heart wallowed,
Bleeding like the heavy rain,
Washing away my serenity,
My breath taken away,
Frozen,
Deep inside...

Where's the courage?
To face all of this,
So alone,
I couldn't let it go,
I couldn't let myself see,
The truth behind the veil of life...

Baby, you were gone,
So far away from me,
I tried to reach out,
Trying to touch your hand,
But I couldn't...

Baby, you were gone,
Leaving me frozen,
In my state of despair,
Of shattered heart and soul...

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