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- Frozen crystal heart
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Click hereI have a broken crystal heart
Given to me as I was born
I fixed it with snow and ice
Now it glitters gloriously
From all I hide it behind my smiles
Because even a one tiny warm thouch
Could melt it
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lorencinoover 14 years agoStill good. but . . .
I fear that human warmth will break my worthless heart.<br><br>
To me, this poem is a little rough compared to the first four you submitted. I think the wording needs tightening to give it the punch of your other poems.
