Gag

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susansnow
susansnow
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nevermind the snakes nor this thirst
nor the guitar that sings like love
or the one that screams for the sake
of screaming. the way you moved your
body made me get my affairs in order.


everyday for me is compare contrast
and solitaire I want to punch language
in its face I want the ability like
Moses to part waters of words and walk
through them with nowhere really to go.

susansnow
susansnow
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susansnowsusansnowover 10 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

If you guys ever have questions, please don't hesitate to contact me. I'd be happy to share the story behind the story. Or the one beneath it.

todski28todski28over 10 years ago
I agree with Angeline

however, a lot of your writing I can't access I read them all because you write such interesting things, but I seem to lack the poetic readership to pierce the veil and discern what is really happening. I do love your work though,

AngelineAngelineover 10 years ago
This is wonderful

amazing control of language--a terse and powerful poem.

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