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When I can't breathe,
when I take you on my cool tongue,
      (sheathed in stone)
the bower of your need
where you are made whole,
      (where we are made one)
I am reminded that such reverence
deserves stillness.
I fold my hands around you,
      (you are silk and marble)
so you might feel
      (might be reminded)
that beneath my devout embrace
there is a torrent
of blood and pumping muscle
      (exultant engine)
surging to a peak.

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vrosej10vrosej10almost 15 years ago
Cool

I really like this poem. I got a necrophilia vibe from it (the origins of which I struggle to divine). I like it.

EroticOrogenyEroticOrogenyalmost 15 years ago
The pair work together

I like him also being stone.

bflagsstbflagsstalmost 15 years ago
once in a while people write poems together

but then I end up comparing them like it's a competition. I like your poem better than James'.