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cymry
cymry
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Aces high Dealer
don’t let me down
have some pity
on this poor clown.
Deal those cards
one by one.
Ain’t this grand Baby?
Ain’t this fun?
Stick with me honey
and have a stiff drink.
Watch me play
and my wallet shrink.
Let me tell ya Doll
I’m some kind of sinner.
Kiss me Baby
I just might be a winner.

cymry
cymry
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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Nice...

A fine poem

sweet GA peachessweet GA peachesover 18 years ago
MY THOUGHTS...

CUTE AS HELL !

I liked it , alot .....

*winks*

sGp

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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A nice fun read here

about this fool;

being true to form here,

from his money is soon parted.

duckiesmutduckiesmutover 18 years ago
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I liked this. Playful and fun.

sacksackover 18 years ago
Nice!

I'm not sure if repeating the "ain't" works here, you might want to try a different word. And some of the rhymes sound a bit forced, like sinner and winner. As an exercise, you might want to try re-writing the poem with no rhymes at all, keeping the same sentiments.