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Click hereWe were together at last
Naked, velvety, swollen and wet
Your small body shudders as we touch
And it's a feeling I'll never forget.
Watching through heavy lidded eyes
Sucking the softness of your creamy white breasts
I touch the silken inner folds
And you moan at my tender caress.
Pulling your legs open wide, I lap
You respond to my tongue and long, deep sucks
Our gentleness changes to a quivering frenzy
And you start to cum quickly as we fuck.
I felt the rosy hardness of your clit
As you rise and fall, orgasm is near
Our soft lips meet, your body is mine
Our lovemaking united, it is clear.
Being so direct takes some courage; being so erotic and accurate without being vulgar takes much talent.
... and lorencino, your echoing 'feedback- poem' did not fall behind either!
<br>And you moan at my tender caress<br>
the moan that moves me<br>
like music<br>
touching my soaring emotions<br>
the music<br>
that fills the spaces between us<br><br>
nicely done. very descriptive. some very nice images. generally a very enjoyable poem to read