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Click hereO fat man,
You grab at fleshy delights
You wallow in the slippery oil
Of passion.
O passion,
You suckle at the creamy tit
You founder on shallow shoals
Of sexuality.
O sexuality,
You lap up succulent juices
You feast on savoury herbs
Of pleasure.
O pleasure,
You give yourself for him to gnaw
You feed his lustful need and grow
O fat man.
And I like this piece, the lead in from one stanza to the next and ending where you began. Was this written to a form I wonder or just very well structured?
And this is why I like trolling the older threads, look at all the good stuff to be found :)
Little circle you create.
And some nice words choices and images
Sorry i missed this first time around
: )