- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Go Postal
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how dare you!
this divorce; a torch of
our brief follies.
back and forth in all the lies;
truth merely in the volleys.
don't be bitter -
them vows drain.
suffer a short while -
don't blame it on stupidity;
it's not all mis-fortune.
thirst for another to enhance
in marital bliss.
the cup runs over;
conquer the distant lover.
be heroic; reproduction is
all in the act.
all that prodding for truth
in the madness of love,
resembles blow-up features
all to convenient in mail order.
- COMMENTS
LeBrozalmost 16 years agoThis poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 39,500 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.<br>
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twelveoonealmost 19 years agowhoa,
nice, you are doing some fine interplay here.
Do something with this line:
"the cup runs over;"
as is, it detracts
Jennifer Calmost 19 years agois it worth it in the end?
I have no idea but i did
enjoy your poem very much
and agree with Sack that you
captured the awkwardness of
the situation and all the feelings
that go along with it.
A cleverly written piece,
Thanks.
~ J
My Erotic Talealmost 19 years agolike the scribbled lines of a 'lie detector' back and forth in waves <<grinin>> or the crashing splash of the sea against a shores rock, then draw the calm water outward to buid up for the next ....going postal <bigrin> somebody call 911 twice, it's twos day! be well one mi amigo~
sackalmost 19 years agoSome of the lines are a bit awkward, but that adds to the power of the poem. In a situation like this, feelings are a little rough around the edges, and that's what you've captured here. A mini-masterpiece!
