Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.
You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.
Click hereThey say
"Good things come to those who wait"
They're right
Waiting for my true love
was the best decision I ever made
he makes my heart smile from miles away
he's my sunshine on a cloudy day
he holds my dreams in the palm of his hand
from this day forth, he'll be my man
He's so much more than my very best friend
and I know what we have will last 'til the end
we've walked through fire
and there's more yet to come
but I'll tell him 'til eternity
he's the only one
the only one to touch my heart
to kiss my fears away
to hold my hand when times are rough
to encourage me to play
I love with every molecule of my being
the human ones
the microbiome
all of me
all of him
me and him
Good things
forever.
but I do want to say that your work is promising. One bit of advice I would give you ( that was given me ten years ago) ____ who is/are "they"?
Words such as they make your poem weak because readers seem to enjoy poetry/prose with more certainty than you have given us.
I wish you the best and while you are here, take advantage of the enormous amount of talent you have access to. Best Wishes and Keep on Writing!!!!
~maria