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Click hereGrace
They stormed through the door
Armed and dangerous
One guy shouting at all of us,
“All you fuckers hit the floor!”
I quickly obey
I want to see another day
Just stopped in for a quick drink
Never considered, I didn’t think
That there was any risk of danger
As some abusive stranger
Rummages through my pockets
Grabbing my wallet and keys
I turn to look at my personal thief
Foot on my neck fills me with belief
That this is not some hazy dream
The tension is punctured with a scream
Following after the unmistakable blast
A voice shouts again, “Just get the cash!”
It’s over in a matter of minutes
They’re here, then out of this place
I look to my left, shocked to see
A head without a face
Coulda, shoulda, woulda been me
A stream of blood flowing under my feet
Oh, yeah, there
But for some grace go I
Living on each day,
Each day to die
Every second,
Every minute,
Every hour filled
With a toxic dose
Of overwhelming guilt
This poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 40,000 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.<br>
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haunting visuals this one left.
harsh read and yes i'd have to agree, the rhyme ois forced at points, free style would capture the essence of this poem so much better.
very nice though.
and actually thought the poem should rhyme more consistently. I was reading it like gansta rap....to me it had that kind of flow. Guess we each have our own way of interpreting what we read. I just know i felt it.
...with Eve that the content is good, and the rhyming pattern weakens the poem severely, and needs to be rewritten into free verse.
It would be stronger without the simple rhyming pattern. Perhaps free verse would work nicely here.
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