Grace

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bluerains
bluerains
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I watched, as you gathered
patched up pieces of your
world.
I whispered, "breathe",
knowing all the while
teardrops would drown your
soul with each gasp.
Yet, I clung to the hope
that a faint breeze would
sweep each broken
sliver into the silent
wind of yesterday,
planting your
vision in the eyes
of tomorrow just
so I could walk
in your fields of blue
once more...

bluerains
bluerains
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normal jeannormal jeanover 14 years ago
beautiful

I do not recall reading this before. It is my loss. excellent sensitive work, Blue; nice job.

hugs,

NJ

LeBrozLeBrozalmost 16 years ago
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This poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 40,000 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.<br>

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MayhemLassMayhemLassalmost 18 years ago
I felt the breath ..

the whisper and the sweet sadness ...

GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasurealmost 18 years ago
beautiful.......

..........and sad. Nicely done blue!

Tess

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailalmost 18 years ago
passion penned

I felt the grace of your poetic pen that flowed from your passionate heart felt words (~_~) excellent poem

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