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Grammar In The Round...

byAncient117331©

Forgive me this moment
of simplicity...
the 'dark' was creeping in
at the edges
and the mind
is a terrible thing to let loose
roaming without reign -
as you see...

"Grammar In The Round..."

I have been the object of a pre-position.
Just a dangling participle
to moments of adverbial praise.
A subjective pause,
with obverse flaws
and to many - an objective clause,
taken as if an incomplete phrase
lacking a conjunctive connection
to their adjectival ways.

The past - tense
began with this - progression
of a future -
perfect
yet still indicative
of a coming contraction...
and still remains.

Chris Twyford
Ancient117331
04/14/2005

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