tagNon-Erotic Poetrygrand display

grand display

bysmithpeter©

seems like one of those poems
when the fireworks just finished
or have not started

we went for a drink or the toilet
never returned to soft lawn in July
to bend neck ooooing

we went down on our knees
got sloppy
gurgled in each others juice

near the water, onlookers
saw two shows
reflections extinguished

we went for more conversation
hair pulling
incineration, like chain-smokes
only more breathless

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