- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Gray Crayon
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I am like a gray crayon
Barely noticed and hardly used
And sadly, I dont become at all amused
With the fact that I am just "that girl,"
But of course, on the inside, I'm certainly no pearl
My personality is mind-boggling,
Like the paranormal, like a ghost,
But the thing that I love, the thing I love most
Is my love for good writing, creativity too
But in my own eyes, I'm nothing that new
I'm a nobody, someone as common as grass
But to those who dont care,
You can kiss my . . .
Gray Crayon.
- COMMENTS
LeBrozabout 17 years agoBit of a unique vision you're sharing here. My only concern is that it sounds less like poetry and more like you're having a chat with your readers.
<P>As an example, try out this change in your first four lines; it seems to add strength to its poetic qualities:</P>
<P>I'm like a gray crayon,</P>
<P>Barely noticed and used;</P>
<P>Sadly, I'm not at all amused</P>
<P>With the fact that I'm just "that girl."</P>
duddle146about 17 years agoA very cute rendering with a 'go cheney yourself' ending. I like a girl that speaks her mind.
Unbridled_Passionabout 17 years agothe gray crayon-but I have never been one to color inside the lines
