tagNon-Erotic PoetryGrilln' the Lime

Grilln' the Lime


I am a Corona commercial,
sun grilled with a lime slice.
Each wave a current event,
each sunset seen through a longneck,
fish eye view of a golden world.

Never let a wave pass by,
nod to all the ladies - all shapes and sizes.
The sweat of congeniality
calling for a cordial,
each cordial calling for a companion.

Close your eyes - test the other senses,
hear the surf
taste the hops
touch the foam
smell the salt,
pass the time - grilln' the lime.

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