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breathless as it comes
 heart frozen still
 heated thoughts fill the mind
 and touch mental planes
 that send imaginations on round trip flights
 making contact, lips part
 so softly, so deeply

 twisting
 twirling
 sliding

 pausing
 deeper
 gliding

 inducing sighs
 making blood pressures rise


 slow
 sinsual
 sucking

 deep
 mental
 fucking

 mental strokes
 verbal tokes
 to get you higher than moons in the morning
 thinking darker than the sun at night

 as deep as a poet in thought (that's deep)
 as deep as a poet's dreams (that's deeper)
 as deep as prostitute pussy (damn, how deep is that?)
 as deep as the pockets of poetry's pimp (no comment)
 but it's deep

 it brings butterflies to your stomach
 leaving the lingering sinsation of a soul
 goosebumps show up without invitation
 mirages take on life form
 as you enjoy the literal licks from my ink tongue
 my words form lips and whisper dreams
 as I blow you

a poetic kiss


                  ~Poetic Kiss~

 rsjsj

©the Mytsexxy/Sinsualmind Experience, all rights reserved

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flyguy69flyguy69over 19 years ago
A little trite

Not as strong as your previous offerings. i like the surpise at the end, however.

annaswirlsannaswirlsalmost 20 years ago
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this poem will be mentioned in the new poems thread. I will send an email when I am finished.

I love this:

"deep

mental

fucking"

tear out the cliche -- and give it to us in your words-- it will be so much more meaningful and powerful.

Consider your little comments (that's deep) in italics

or remove them.

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