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Click herebreathless as it comes
heart frozen still
heated thoughts fill the mind
and touch mental planes
that send imaginations on round trip flights
making contact, lips part
so softly, so deeply
twisting
twirling
sliding
pausing
deeper
gliding
inducing sighs
making blood pressures rise
slow
sinsual
sucking
deep
mental
fucking
mental strokes
verbal tokes
to get you higher than moons in the morning
thinking darker than the sun at night
as deep as a poet in thought (that's deep)
as deep as a poet's dreams (that's deeper)
as deep as prostitute pussy (damn, how deep is that?)
as deep as the pockets of poetry's pimp (no comment)
but it's deep
it brings butterflies to your stomach
leaving the lingering sinsation of a soul
goosebumps show up without invitation
mirages take on life form
as you enjoy the literal licks from my ink tongue
my words form lips and whisper dreams
as I blow you
a poetic kiss
~Poetic Kiss~
rsjsj
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Not as strong as your previous offerings. i like the surpise at the end, however.
this poem will be mentioned in the new poems thread. I will send an email when I am finished.
I love this:
"deep
mental
fucking"
tear out the cliche -- and give it to us in your words-- it will be so much more meaningful and powerful.
Consider your little comments (that's deep) in italics
or remove them.