Gun Show, Last Night in Atlantic City

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You'll be smilin' all night long
before you check out, Johnny Boy,
with my CZ TT.

Treat you right,
give you everything you need
for a fair and friendly price.

You mind I call you Johnny Boy?
Most my Johnnies have a need
For AH - no - NYM - iTEE.

I play along,
no need for forms
to read and write your name on
for a friendly price.

What room you're in is all I need.
I'll bring it with me when it's right
after midnight, Johnny Boy.

Hairpin trigger I just know
you want to finger;
one fine piece; one fine price.

Johnny Boy's a working man. Am I right?
Work your ass off all day long
get your family what they need
put up with shit from dim-wit boys
you have to work with.

What a price you pay.
And suburban life, the prize
you once thought it was?

This lady longs
to have her chamber
cocked just right.

CZ TT's what you need.
What's your number, Johnny Boy?

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MyaFeelsMyaFeelsover 3 years ago

So good! I was almost moving like I could hear a beat.

twelveoonetwelveoonealmost 10 years ago
fuckin 1201

don't call me johnny. yeh. what tod said,

this is a nice break for you.

5ed

TsothaTsothaalmost 10 years ago

And "last night" is back in the title. :D Wonderful double meaning, and the edit really brought life to the thug.

tazz317tazz317almost 10 years ago
ENTENDRES ALWAYS MAKES GOOD READING

with doubles let your conscience dictate, TK U MLJ LV NV

UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellalmost 10 years ago
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Your poems are always a good read, I've yet to see a dud! A very imaginative piece.

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