- Erotic Poetry
- Gypsy Red
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Gypsy red, deep woods girl.
Diamond blue eyes, mercury mouth.
Craving fingers, fragile curves.
Scarlet mind, lips of passion.
Unleashed heart, collared desire.
Thoughts like smoke, raven black.
Full moon stirrings, a wicked smile.
Tantric tumult, hypnotic yearnings.
Deep knee diver, hashish halo.
Virginia vagina, Alaskan asking.
Head expert, newcomer novice.
Photographic priestess, Derry air.
Naked in the forest, hiding freely.
Sensual submissive, power preying.
- COMMENTS
LeBrozabout 17 years agoThe difficulty I have with this piece is that, while there are some very well done phrases, they seem to serve no purpose and go nowhere; there's no unifying theme with which to string them together.
RisiaSkyeabout 17 years agopromising, but feels a bit unfinished. some clever turns of phrase, and some rich tones. with a little less overused phrasing (i.e. ravens are pretty much dead as useful imagery--just done to death), a tight read.
Anonymousabout 17 years agoSome good images here
Could be tightened further, though
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