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Kaishaku
Kaishaku
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no safe passage
        fingers on forbidden
            flesh

dark fabric parts
         to the fragrance
    a damp opium
            a taste,  a taste
                  a taste of --

            pressed between
                your knees
       my tongue enters
                        a sacred land
                 my fate sealed
                            with a moan

                        I     infidel

 
 
  

Kaishaku
Kaishaku
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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Another 5 star poem!

Love the line breaks!

annaswirlsannaswirlsalmost 19 years ago
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raised 2 levels with the last line. very nice

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
*****

mentioned in May 3rd reviews.

Tess

Wanton VixxxenWanton Vixxxenalmost 19 years ago
From the foods for the belly...

you bring us now to the appetite of forbidden love. In those few words you took Me to the hunger of his erotic yearnings - her. Another of your delightful cuisines to be devoured by the images you penned here today. A sizzling, spicy hot write, K!

Now I'm starving. <wink>

Voracious Vixxx

twelveoonetwelveoonealmost 19 years ago
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nicely done, like the formating

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