tagNon-Erotic PoetryHalf a Dozen Little Thoughts

Half a Dozen Little Thoughts

bytodski28©

The mockery of a shadow
betrays our years
a personal sundial
whiling away our time
a mocking trip, a
ticking clock
a constant
reminder
__________________________________________________

your love reminds me of
a panel saw
smooth slide in
two counter rotating blades
honed sharp
the first pulls me in the second
cuts me apart.
________________________________________________

spider webs hang between
tin waves,
collecting dust,
roof pitched off kilter
__________________________________________________

Rows of grout, linear
lines that run in
perfect tracks,
white squares neat,
there it lays
jagged imperfection,
highlighted by perfection.
__________________________________________________

Words have no weight,
yet the substance of yours
tie me to my chair
binding me here,
a thick rope of nothing
__________________________________________________

cold water hits
my still steaming
shoulders,
as I wash your poetry
from my lips

Report Story

bytodski28© 5 comments/ 500 views/ 2 favorites

Share the love

Similar stories

Report a Bug

1 Pages:1

Please Rate This Submission:

Please Rate This Submission:

  • 1
  • 2
  • 3
  • 4
  • 5
Please wait
Recent
Comments
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Tsotha04/28/14

Holy crap. Those are great, Tod!

Ok, to make this useful. On the fourth one, the imperfection/perfection lines don't quite work for me. And "there it lays" — what lays? Imperfection, itself? A jaggedmore...

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Show more comments or
Read All 5 User Comments  or
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission (click here to send private anonymous feedback to the author instead).

Post comment as (click to select):

You may also listen to a recording of the characters.

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel