- Erotic Poetry
- Hallowe'en (Strip)Tease
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Click hereWho was this Athene with attitude, this
unstartled Diana stripping sensually in my
small flat, this Gilda prepared to shed
rather more than a glove?
Who was she who caught my eye at the
crowded bar, spoke first when I couldn't
imagine what to say, and got
straight to the point?
Who was she who bared her small
sharp breasts, her sharp hips, her
lack of underwear, with the
shake of a snake?
Who was she whose hot mouth
clamped itself to mine, whose
cool hand stroked my sex to an
unbearable hardness?
Who was she who made my bed a
maelstrom, folded like origami,
had the strength of an
Amazon in her tiny torso?
Who was she who was gone when I
awoke, her smell all over me, her
dress where she'd dropped it and her
impossible heels askew?
- COMMENTS
Angelineover 11 years agoeven when you're a bit campy, you use such delightful turns of phrase. Nice to see your poem here, friday. :-)
HarryHillover 11 years agoReferences to female figures in the first stanza was (to me) boring and pedantic. but...
very nice write
twelveooneover 11 years agoof course
missed you, your writing, the tipping line. nothing about this is
askew.
perfect balance, i guess if i had to pick
3rd stanza
is a fav
