Hamlet On The Hammock

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HAMLET ON THE HAMMOCK

i am a non-native -
heavy-headed and weary-eyed
in spirits and taxed as if swine.
it is custom in america,
that oil, is merely like bone marrow
from east to west.
madness is foreseen;
though the fortune's star
is an infinite achievement
in corruption and ignorance;
(since nature cannot defend itself)
america's complexion is a bit oily - isn't it?

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quietpoetquietpoetover 18 years ago
The most insidious

villain is oil. You nailed it man!!!!

QP

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 18 years ago
Greasy Treat !!

I like like like it !!!

Thoughtful and witty.

A lil tongue in cheek ... with

a greasing of the hands to boot.

Just a great poem

with Hammock humor ... notice

not bathroom humor ! *grins*

More Please ~

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
I would say

we need to get our towels out and clean up the grease stains...

http://www.djpauledge.com/blog.php?id=109

nice work 44...missed your view from dc..bluerains

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Nice return...

..after a week or two. Where have you been, oiling America?

As 1201 said, not perfect but damn good. Congrats.

b'brig

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
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Your poem was mentioned in the Sunday Reviews.

du lac~

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