- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Handcuffed
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Click hereHe wrote late last week,
And it broke my heart all over.
Nights are the worst.
Days, I can focus on work.
Could he really have changed?
Until I dug his note out of the trash,
Flicking off sunflower seeds, and
Folding it carefully away,
Ending it seemed so right.
Damn him to hell.
- COMMENTS
vrosej10about 13 years agoThe second half is excellent because you focussed on concrete detail. In poetry you arrive at feelings through the presentation of things. You'd have been better presenting you physical reaction to the break up than to say your heartbroke. You have some ability. Keep working at it.
Maria2394about 13 years agolittle acrostic. I saw it on the passion thread. glad you posted it here. good work.
GuiltyPleasureabout 13 years ago......little ode to lost love. A little prosey in the beginning but I'll be looking for more poems from Lilacs. Good first submission. Keep writing, please.
Tess
