- Erotic Poetry
- Hands All Over
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Click hereDon't you love that feeling,
The moment before
You're going to do something bad
And you do it anyway?
In my mind, I'm a lioness
Prowling and slinky
Wrapping around you
Like smoky sex on legs
I have a plan
In my head at least
To seduce you into it
Hear me roar
Back to real life
Standing in your den
Hunter on the inside
Prey on the outside
I'm scared shitless, really
Maybe I'll turn into Grace Kelly
And back out of this
Pride intact
But It's the look on your face
That crane of your neck
That absolute need
To have your hands all over me
You convinced me to pounce.
- COMMENTS
Maria2394over 12 years agoThe first stanza makes almost no sense at all. In fact the entire poem seems to be missing something. I think you should have shelved this one and worked on it a little more before submitting it. I know I have done that very thing and thankfully, I got help from exceptional people who are not even here anymore.
However, submitting it to get suggestions often works. I hope some of the really good poets help you out, I'm afraid I am not quite good enough to offer you any suggestions.
best wishes, good luck and keep writing :)
maria
