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Click hereon that night,
her
and i,
already intoxicated
in the moment.
that moon -
no sliver of recall,
but
this binge induced;
possessed
our breaths in my chevy -
so intense,
that the telephone pole;
absorbed -
in great effect,
the french kiss behind the wheel.
symbolized,
as it should -
a thirst uncontrolled.
that nymph's stiletto tongue
ever-present and - so clear,
yet lingers -
destined under influence
subtly
every morning after.
But you did! Clever, witty, and very believable!
..on lust here dcp, nicely drunk.
I'm jealous, as all I ever had was a mini to do the deed in and it was more likely it was the gear stick doing the deed!
Lovely little poem.
b'brig
I enjoyed the literary Art to your poem as well as the clever write <grin>
I loved the read more than the layout. I've been looking
for time to read you, this is an interesting start that
I liked a lot. sandspike
A really great piece,
a thirst uncontrolled.
that nymph's stiletto tongue
ever-present and - so clear,
yet lingers -
destined under influence
subtly
every morning after.
Loved that bit!
Nice work,
Thanks.
~ J