Hangover Vigilante

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on that night,
          her
              and i,
already intoxicated
                in the moment.
that moon -
     no sliver of recall,
                   but
            this binge induced;
possessed
our breaths in my chevy -
                    so intense,
            that the telephone pole;
                       absorbed -
    in great effect,
the french kiss behind the wheel.
symbolized,
    as it should -
                a thirst uncontrolled.
that nymph's stiletto tongue
            ever-present and - so clear,
                     yet lingers -
              destined under influence
    subtly
         every morning after.

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5 Comments
sacksackalmost 19 years ago
a hard topic to write about effectively....

But you did! Clever, witty, and very believable!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Drunk..

..on lust here dcp, nicely drunk.

I'm jealous, as all I ever had was a mini to do the deed in and it was more likely it was the gear stick doing the deed!

Lovely little poem.

b'brig

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Talealmost 19 years ago
Nice write Don~

I enjoyed the literary Art to your poem as well as the clever write <grin>

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
cool

I loved the read more than the layout. I've been looking

for time to read you, this is an interesting start that

I liked a lot. sandspike

Jennifer CJennifer Calmost 19 years ago
excellent

A really great piece,

a thirst uncontrolled.

that nymph's stiletto tongue

ever-present and - so clear,

yet lingers -

destined under influence

subtly

every morning after.

Loved that bit!

Nice work,

Thanks.

~ J

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