happy hollowness

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happy hollowness.
enjoy the empty
belief is empty
meaning is empty
triumph is empty
defeat is eternal

razor wires connect
truth spewing liars
magnets of hypocracy
searching for an enemy
never questioning within
hiding behind empty sins

lost art of speciality
willing denial of reality
careful space is broken
injected toxins
fill every stream

blood lies behind
every stitched seam
unknot this world
be setting yourself free

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doormousedoormouseover 19 years ago
doingmybest

wow!!

That was really good!! Deep.

Well Done ;-)

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 19 years ago
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doingmybestdoingmybestover 19 years agoAuthor
to all hallows eve

me and my musical companions were singing on last halloween and somewhere along the line, happy hallowness came out! if we're gonna be empty inside, mught as well enjoy it.

your comments mean the world to me, thanks!

annaswirlsannaswirlsover 19 years ago
and that is pretty damn good

Hi dmb.

The first stanza, that repetition of line ends works. Usually makes me cringe, this works. cheers. Look forward to more of your work... I think there are two

right

there...

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