harpoon- dropping the anchor

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passion upload #2-

goldilocks
jumpin’ on beds
breaking chairs
never finding the right fit
slip into sleep

squeeze into
dark room everyone has
new black shoes
some shine some buff
not mine
alone, nothing on toe

try again

with the new sofa delivery
singing rat animatronic cardboard pizza
playdate and metabolife
women watch and wonder why
my breast still belongs to a 12 month old

today my breast belongs to no one
drowning here in a sea of poets
with bubbles that sink
steel that floats over waves
and me hovering between
riding the current

dressed in parka
dodging anchor and
what is the goddamn name for that thing
you use to shoot
animals
in
the
ocean


still try

grind me down
whetstone and metal,
cut in two

the shape will never hold
just seem to melt the mold

wishing I actually
existed
somewhere

~
that poem that echoes_s was referring to in Anchorage- all of a sudden passion suddenly

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LeBrozLeBrozalmost 16 years ago
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This poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 40,000 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.<br>

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YDDYDDalmost 20 years ago
"singing rat animatronic cardboard pizza"

Did you swallow a Hale pill?

A very good poem.

A fun read.

jthserrajthserraalmost 20 years ago
Swapping inspiration...

for a wonderful poem...

jim : )

steve portersteve porteralmost 20 years ago
You reached me...

...in your poem that seems determined to exist and how your spirit spills out and escapes. Excellent.

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 20 years ago
oh my goodness...

This is better than good. I want to take this poem out on a date and get to know it better! Original, well written, just fabulous. I just read Ange's caramel suite and I was feeling totally envious and now I read this. I just can't stand it! I'm going to write something incredible right now!

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